Date: 09/12/2023
Name: JOEL OCHOA
A short story extract
Sam squinted against the sun at the distant dust trail raked up by the car on its way up to the
Big House. The horses kicked and flicked their tails at flies, not caring about their owner’s first
visit in ten months. Sam waited. Mr. Carter didn’t come out here unless he had to, which was
just fine by Sam. The more he kept out of his boss’s way, the longer he’d have a job.
Carter came by later while Sam was chopping wood. Carter lifted his hat as if he were waiting
for an appointment with the town priest, and then removed it completely as if he were talking
to his mother. He pulled out a pile of paper from his back pocket and held it out.
‘Don’t pick up your mail often, do you?’
Sam took it without a glance and dropped the envelopes onto the bench.
‘Never,’ he replied and waited for Carter to say why he was here. The fact it was Carter’s house
was no explanation and they both knew it. Carter twisted his hat round and round, licking his
lips and clearing his throat.
‘Nice work fixing those fences,’ he said finally.
‘I’ll be back to the beginning soon,’ Sam said. It wasn’t a complaint. A fence that took a year to
repair meant another year’s work to the man who did it well.
‘Don’t you ever want to take a holiday?’
‘And go where?’ A holiday meant being back out in the real world, a place even people like
Carter travelled to escape from. Sam’s escape was his reality and he wasn’t going back.
Mr. Carter wiped the sweat from the back of his neck. The damp patches on his shirt drew
together like shapes in an atlas. His skin was already turning ruddy in the June sun. Otherwise,
he had the indoor tan of a man that made money while other people did the work.
‘I’ve brought my son with me on this trip. He’s had some trouble at school.’ Mr. Carter’s eyes
flicked up, blinked rapidly and then shifted back to the hat occupying his hands. ‘Not much
trouble out here for a young boy.’ He attempted a laugh but it came out like a dog’s bark.
The two men looked towards the northern end of the property. It stretched as far as the eye
could see. Even the fences were barely visible from where they stood. However bored and
rebellious a teenage boy might get, it wasn’t possible to escape on foot. Sam looked at the
biggest of the horses, kicking at the ground with its heavy hooves. Could the boy ride? He
wondered. There was a whole load of trouble a good rider could get into out here, miles away
from anyone. But maybe there was even more trouble for someone who knew nothing about
horses and wanted to get away from his father.
1. What is Sam’s reaction to his letters?
a. Uninterested
b. Surprised
c. Afraid
